Thks for helping to upload the picture. I just fix it.
^^作者: lerico 時間: 2008-1-8 22:12
Since I am not a girl, I won't wanna comment on the design. But I noticed that we usually say "Get Rid OF something" instead, hmmm... but does anybody wanna get rid of comfort?
... also... shouldn't it be "Be a Sexy Lady" instead of "A" Ladies?
okie....now i can see the picture !
im a girl....so im gonna give u comments...straight forward ones
1st .... i dun really like the pentagon around the word "BRA" or is that the logo? haha if so, i dun like the logo design haha....
2nd...my first impression of the ad "WOw....seems like a sex store more than a lingerie store....
3rd....the background shud be either pink or something light colored (pastel perhaps) to actually RELATE to the event since its NEW YEAR SALE and its for valentines...
4th, change the font ....
5th....the picture's position is kinda....awkward....also, for that "coupon" look a like thing is kinda awkward also....
haha...
i shud stop now....let me just point out these....haha
dun mind me for my straight forward-ness!!作者: -chunchun- 時間: 2008-1-8 22:24 標題: ths
thks for the comment.. I redo again and post later ..
Ths作者: hunny_master 時間: 2008-1-8 22:31
somehow i think the slogan "get rid OF comfort, be free" does not match with the pictures...i don't see how they relate to each other...作者: katamari 時間: 2008-1-8 22:33
haha and make sure the photos are legal to use!作者: Alcoholic 時間: 2008-1-8 23:03
i agree that this looks more like a XXX ad more than a proper lingerie store.
maybe you should use real products that your friend sell to display, rather than model pics from elsewhere.
even though it's themed valentine's day (meant to be gifts for guys to see), the models are displaying "erotic", & not "romantic". the kind of pictures used is focused on the men's affection...which should be focused on the women's affection instead. alot of women will actually buy lingerie to wear for the guy. so it should promote feminity instead, something they actually LIKE. rather than seeing what the GUYS like to see. all i can say is wrong mood.
valentines day promotion...in black?! NO!
ok...red is too common....so is pink. sounds like victoria secret huh? well... at lease use a nice shade of purple would be original~ (just a suggestion)作者: Traum 時間: 2008-1-9 00:22
